Author Topic: [FAN FICTION] My Forged Wedding (Read 5827 times)

Leileya · **on:** February 13, 2013, 09:25:46 AM

Note: To those of you who have been reading my Pirates in Love fan fiction, although I knew that I wanted to write more stories for the other games I had no intention on actually writing any until a friend gave me the idea for a My Forged Wedding Fan-fiction. Please note that this is a story based off the Voltage game however the story is completely mine. As always I hope you enjoy this story as much as I enjoyed writing it.

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melonsmiles · **Reply #1 on:** October 01, 2013, 01:15:35 AM

I really really really really hope you continue this :C

Hopelessromantic88 · **Reply #2 on:** March 13, 2014, 10:34:50 AM

Ah! This is soo good my hearts pounding! Please continue :)

Aiwethryne · **Reply #3 on:** June 26, 2014, 01:00:18 PM

@ jolly~ I'll tentatively hope that you're not a spambot, so I omitted that housing ad for good measure.
Aaaand seeing as you put it back up, that's a no-no~ Taa~ <3

Aside from that, I completely forgot I had never replied about this story~ Read it a long time ago, so I skimmed through it again to recollect things. It's a great read, but one of the main things that stuck in my brain since before were all the ellipses in the dialogue. While it is a point of stylistic preference and exemplifies certain mannerisms, I still found it rather excessive. Employing the effect on multiple characters lessened the impact of punctuated pauses and verbal ritardando.