I'll try not to cringe every time I see some terrible line that is just offensive and uncalled for. I probably wouldn't mind as much if I found the guy to be attractive. He's better than Charles at least. The girl is cute but can't she stop making that scared or clueless expression. She has a nice rack, do we get to see her out of those clothes?
Maybe I'm too used to reading extending sex scenes but that was too short. The game uses all those crude words but it seems pretty pointless to me. All it does is piss me off. If they're going to write about sex, at least make it good! >:( Gimme all the juicy details!
Michael is just a mortal that looks down on others, the way I see him. He doesn't fit my image of how a devil is. Like Diaval is a good devil. Attractive, seductive, dangerous, irresistible, charming, tall, dark, and handsome. lol
From what I've read so far, he's only depending on looks. That awful pickup ugh
Sorry I just feel strongly about how wrong it is to me.
I'm in the midst of chapter 2 now and hopefully it gets better once they have to face reality.